L.L. encourages us, this week, to not “shrink from the darkness...”
Here is my offering.
Valentine
Once
upon a time
Love was
a craft store heart
bold and full
and brilliant red,
with voluptuously
rounded analogous curves
and
perfectly pointed tip.
White lace would surround
clean and bright
and
wonderful
this partial carefully bedded
in crumpled tissue
and placed in box
to be
opened on special occasions and
exclaimed over
before packed away again.
Once
upon a time
I never knew
the fleshy bleeding pulse
of real love
this messy mass of muscle
which strengthens with exertion
This wound in my chest
a holy ache
as hands reach
in
try to pull sinews
free this pounding
fear inside
This heart
beats
outside of this body
and joy
walk hand in hand
bound
by real love.
**friends, I will resume our online Bible study of Jennifer Rothschild's book, Soul Talk Self Talk next week. Rather than posting on this week's chapter, I am choosing to practice what the Psalmist encourages us to do: Look up.
Thank you for sticking with me.




15 comments:
Laura, I loved the surprise ending...
sister-friends
bound
by real love.
Great twist on the way we usually see Valentine's Day. : )
beautiful...He is thrilled as your gaze looks up...His beloved
You are such a JOY!
Love ya,
Yolanda
Laura, this is absolutely amazing!!! I'm printing this off so I can look at it, meditate on it this week. As always, you have blessed my heart this day:)
I love the ending, Laura...
"where sorrow
and joy
walk hand in hand"
Beautiful... it is such a treat to read your writing and I'm so thankful to have found your blog, dear friend.
Your heart and hand are tied together so elegantly in your written expressions. Thank you for choosing to listen to the creative call of the Spirit and for expressing His artistry from the wellspring within you.
I love the contrast in your words between love as flimsy concrete ideal and love as pulsing, strenuous reality. Your poem is very lovely, and I am glad you shared it.
beautiful beautiful beautiful!
can I just say I LOVE it here!
I Love your blog, always good stuff.
Good soul food!
Thanks & Luv!
Deanna
Thank you for your prayers for my family when you heard the news of storms & tornados in OK.
I really appreciate your prayers Laura.
Hi Laura,
Thanks for visiting me at Paper Lanterns. I'm here in your "living room" now, and enjoying the conversation and fellowship you're offering.
These lines are particularly enjoyable to me:
"analogous curves"
"carefully bedded"
"exclaimed over"
"fleshy bleeding pulse"
I was there. I saw it all in my mind's eye.
Wow! I love this poem. It so clearly sings of the vulnerable nature of letting your heart truly love...the wearing your heart on the outside, where it risks breaking and yet grows stronger with every exertion. As opposed to the craft-store heart, which is so neat and clean and safe, but two dimensional. Yea! I'm so happy to find your blog!
This is so beautiful. Keep looking up my friend. Praying for you.
Love Carol
the paradox of what strengthens with exertion ... breaking down.
the transformation of a life is what keeps me on the edge of my seat ... in films, in stories, in these words here, Laura. and the bridge between the two is God! Happy Valentines Day.
This is so beautiful.
Hmmm, this was so good, love how you describe love in the beginning, so accurate of how we first perceive it, until we learn. :)
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