Tuesday, January 5, 2010

Jumping on the Bed






Shards of light
fall from sky
on carpet
of deep
and life sleeps
except one…
who must walk
the dogs.
stepping
foot on
this bed seems
a heinous
offense. but
i want to
jump,
ruffle these
covers
and shake
out
the sheets.
sadly
there is no
time
for play;
world is waking
sleepy eyes
peer from
window,
and I
must go
to work.


19 comments:

Faye said...

Laura, I loved the poem! Hope you have a great day! Blessings, Faye

grey like snuffie said...

no time to play...maybe another time the world will be stopped and the child in you will have time.

Yolanda said...

Very sweet, and I love when there IS time to play.

Much love!
Yolanda

ELK said...

yes..i. am .fixed. at. the. window.

Maureen said...

Wonderful, with a perfect title.

Life intrudes so suddenly on what is but a moment like a dream; voices start up and . . . well, you've saved the moment here and we all imagine what it's like.

Kelly Langner Sauer said...

I just love the metaphor here - I am neurotic about having a bed with no wrinkles in it, but in the snow - "I want to jump, ruffle these covers and shake out the sheets" - you TEMPT me to much! OH, I miss snow!

A Simple Country Girl said...

what a wonderful morning you've described...

Jennifer @ Getting Down With Jesus said...

Beautiful! I want to jump, too.

Tracy said...

I love this. The waking moments of the day, it expresses them perfectly. Thank you for these words!

Andrea said...

Your poems and words always speak to my heart. I awoke this morning with a migraine. When I read this poem, it was if GOD was saying: Shake off the pain of this world....let ME fight your battles!
Thank you, Laura for continually being a living vessel for HIM.
andrea

S. Etole said...

The deer had rumpled the covers on mine today and left an amazing story ...

L.L. Barkat said...

oh, just one little jump before leaving... :)

sweet poem

sarah said...

this is lovely :-)

Megan Willome said...

The photo is a great addition to a truly great poem. My dogs need walked, too.

Faith Imagined said...

Fantastic poem!

christy rose said...

I want to jump too. We always need to stop and take the time to play once in awhile. HUH?

Angie Muresan said...

So lovely! I love jumping on the bed with my kids. Somehow we find time to play regardless of how busy our days get. Blessings!

deb said...

I had to get out and jump in it yesterday.
Go for it!

Monica Sharman said...

Does this make us monkeys? ("Mama called the doctor and the doctor said...")

I won't call the doctor on you if you won't call him on me! Next time we get enough for a snow angel, I want to see if I can plop backwards into it before waving my arms and legs.