Wednesday, January 13, 2010

Rebirth

This
is the hope
that is twice
dead;
laughter
from
barren womb.
this--
dead branch
in
my heart
sprouts anew,
manna for
shriveled soul.
resurrection comes
in
form of
words
and I
am shed of
this onus
though
it leaves a
deep lapidary
well, sharp
on edges begging
fingers to find
it’s empty
shell
and rub.
I am
carved
out;
empty.
Hazo asks,
what is left,
then, but
to live
with wounds?
yes, I say,
what?
yet,
over and over
this belly
fire returns.
hope peals--
shatters heaviness
breaks through the
oppressive air
hope.
I hope
still.

16 comments:

Faye said...

Beautiful! Hope you have a great day! Blessings, Faye

Maureen said...

This touched me very much, Laura.

(There is a poets' group on SheWrites and a place within the group to post poetry. I just posted one of my pieces there. I encourage you to do the same.)

grey like snuffie said...

I hope...still....hmmmm...it goes deep

Tina said...

lovely

"I hope still" .....


me too

sarah said...

Deep and touching and beautiful.

Linda said...

I need to read this over and over Laura, to absorb it all.
I cannot imagine taking one more breath without hope.

L.L. Barkat said...

I'm just in awe at the language here. You've upped your expectations of yourself in poetry, I think. And you've answered to it, with this. Really nice.

A Simple Country Girl said...

A person could read this many times over and come away with something new each time. What a web of words you have spun.

manna for shriveled soul--lovely

Blessings.

gary said...

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deb said...

So so beautiful, Laura.
Poignant.
tender vulnerable love, like you

Liz said...

Wow, Laura. Ditto L.L.'s comments. I am in awe of the language. Very nice.

Kelly Langner Sauer said...

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Angie Muresan said...

What beautiful and tender words, Laura. Be blessed.

Monica Sharman said...

Just this morning I journaled about something like this. A rebirth. In me, these things happen regularly, and you have put such powerful words here.

Katrina said...

I've read and read you're words... the feelings you invoke run deep. Yes, what to do but hope. I hope, quietly but desperately. Thank you for sharing this.

Bina @ Bina's Pad said...

...deep, still waters...

That is what came to my mind as I read your beautiful words...thanks for laying out your heart, as it uplifted mine.

Bina