This
is the hope
that is twice
dead;
laughter
from
barren womb.
this--
dead branch
in
my heart
sprouts anew,
manna for
shriveled soul.
resurrection comes
in
form of
words
and I
am shed of
this onus
though
it leaves a
deep lapidary
well, sharp
on edges begging
fingers to find
it’s empty
shell
and rub.
I am
carved
out;
empty.
Hazo asks,
what is left,
then, but
to live
with wounds?
yes, I say,
what?
yet,
over and over
this belly
fire returns.
hope peals--
shatters heaviness
breaks through the
oppressive air
hope.
I hope
still.
Wednesday, January 13, 2010
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16 comments:
Beautiful! Hope you have a great day! Blessings, Faye
This touched me very much, Laura.
(There is a poets' group on SheWrites and a place within the group to post poetry. I just posted one of my pieces there. I encourage you to do the same.)
I hope...still....hmmmm...it goes deep
lovely
"I hope still" .....
me too
Deep and touching and beautiful.
I need to read this over and over Laura, to absorb it all.
I cannot imagine taking one more breath without hope.
I'm just in awe at the language here. You've upped your expectations of yourself in poetry, I think. And you've answered to it, with this. Really nice.
A person could read this many times over and come away with something new each time. What a web of words you have spun.
manna for shriveled soul--lovely
Blessings.
培養健全孩子最好的方法是父母先成為健全的人。.........................
So so beautiful, Laura.
Poignant.
tender vulnerable love, like you
Wow, Laura. Ditto L.L.'s comments. I am in awe of the language. Very nice.
I mentioned you at my blog today. I just wanted you to know I appreciate you! http://bit.ly/8cy6Os
What beautiful and tender words, Laura. Be blessed.
Just this morning I journaled about something like this. A rebirth. In me, these things happen regularly, and you have put such powerful words here.
I've read and read you're words... the feelings you invoke run deep. Yes, what to do but hope. I hope, quietly but desperately. Thank you for sharing this.
...deep, still waters...
That is what came to my mind as I read your beautiful words...thanks for laying out your heart, as it uplifted mine.
Bina
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