Saturday, May 29, 2010
Whole
She spoke to me
of roses and
little birds in
her garden--
this woman who
does not know
where she is
or why…she
kept tracing the
long curved line
from her forehead
to the base of
her skull with
fingers, the
sutures come out
tomorrow.
I listened close-
made mental notes-
about putting oak
leaves around the
crown in the fall
and what type of
seed the grackles
won’t steal. whole.
she is whole in
the flowers. she is
whole for a moment.
she is
whole.
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15 comments:
Moving and heart-felt.
I don't really like reading poetry at the moment but this - this is beautiful. I love it.
Do you wonder (I suddenly do) what it is that would give you that place of "whole" on the day you did not know where you were or why?
I plan to wonder that a while now, until I find it.
this makes my heart sad and happy at the same time.
Do people know they are not whole
only when outsiders tell them so?
Even when minds flood waters of forgetfulness,
does the heart still beat heavy with wholeness?
Blessings.
Your voice gets stronger and more distinct all the time.
I really engaged with this poem.
Laure
Sobbing. Waterfall drenched. Aaahh Laura my dear girl. This I know. You caught me off guard, Words of life where it seems words of death should be. Could you serve kleenex next time?
This is beautiful, Laura. Incredibly so.
I love Lyla's prompt on this one... what would be that one place of wholeness for me?
I'm not sure, but I like thinking about it.
peace~elaine
Your poetry is such a joy to read :)
nice, I liked "she is/whole" strong. Thanks for visiting my blogsite. I am new to blogging and my computer doesn't like tspoetry so Barbie poem came in a little late. Been reading High Calling Blog posts for a while but still just getting my sea legs in this type of community. Liked your red balloon post too.
This is really lovely. Thank you! I'm going to add you to my reader, Laura. It's great to meet you!
your words often catch me by surprise and I find my heart without words ...
She's whole in the flowers.
(wiping tear)
Shivers.
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