Monday, July 5, 2010

The Day After the Fourth of July



summer slips
through my fingers
like the ribbon through
the loop that ties
her hair…slowly fades,
unnoticed—as sunburned
shoulders do. it’s the


day after the parade
and there are shattered
balloons pressed flat
on the storm drain, cardboard
tatters in the street and
the faint lingering scent
of gunpowder. the Texas
sheetcake is covered with
Saran wrap, the home-churned
vanilla ice cream dressed in
lacy crystals. we sat on the porch


last night and listened to the
pop-pop-pop of the
firecrackers, watched the
night sky alight with flames. at
midnight, the revelers all went
to sleep and we watched
the meadow light up with
God’s nightlights. why—


why do the nights seem so
slow and the days disappear
like a glass of ice tea on
a sunny day? Summer is


slipping through my fingers.


**This was written for HCB poetry prompt: A Tablespoon of Summer. Won't you join us in celebrating this sweet season?

15 comments:

Rebecca Ramsey said...

Ooh, I love this! The lacy ice crystals of home churned ice cream, the scent of gunpowder, God's nightlights. It's beautiful.

n. davis rosback said...

i enjoy summer
and your poem too

togetherforgood said...

sigh. this is beautiful. I just love every word.

Glynn said...

That's what summer does -- slips through our fingers. Beautiful, Laura.

Megan Willome said...

Love the iced tea image! I'm drinking it now as summer slip-slides away.

Linda said...

Beautiful images of a summer day and night Laura. It does go quickly, although here in Texas it sometimes seems a tad long :-)

Jennifer @ Getting Down With Jesus said...

Loved the lacy crystals on the home-churned vanilla. Delicious words here...

Maureen said...

Summer's sights, tastes, sounds. . . beautifully delivered.

Charity Singleton said...

Yum, Texas sheet cake . . . I can see the Saran wrap stretched tightly over it. This was beautiful.

Susan DiMickele said...

Beautiful! I love her hair!!!!

emily wierenga said...

i sat there on your porch with you. thank you... beautiful.

Lyla Lindquist said...

The sunburn fading off shoulders...

That's exactly it, isn't it?

Perfect, as usual.

deb said...

absolutely wonderful.
It's so strange. We try to grasp every minute of it, the summer heading into fall with every day.

susie @newdaynewlesson said...

She is so cute and precious. Happy 4th of July (belated)

L.L. Barkat said...

I liked that poignant ending.

(I must say I'd like these heatwave days to slip through my fingers fast though ; - )