Monday, July 5, 2010
The Day After the Fourth of July
summer slips
through my fingers
like the ribbon through
the loop that ties
her hair…slowly fades,
unnoticed—as sunburned
shoulders do. it’s the
day after the parade
and there are shattered
balloons pressed flat
on the storm drain, cardboard
tatters in the street and
the faint lingering scent
of gunpowder. the Texas
sheetcake is covered with
Saran wrap, the home-churned
vanilla ice cream dressed in
lacy crystals. we sat on the porch
last night and listened to the
pop-pop-pop of the
firecrackers, watched the
night sky alight with flames. at
midnight, the revelers all went
to sleep and we watched
the meadow light up with
God’s nightlights. why—
why do the nights seem so
slow and the days disappear
like a glass of ice tea on
a sunny day? Summer is
slipping through my fingers.
**This was written for HCB poetry prompt: A Tablespoon of Summer. Won't you join us in celebrating this sweet season?
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15 comments:
Ooh, I love this! The lacy ice crystals of home churned ice cream, the scent of gunpowder, God's nightlights. It's beautiful.
i enjoy summer
and your poem too
sigh. this is beautiful. I just love every word.
That's what summer does -- slips through our fingers. Beautiful, Laura.
Love the iced tea image! I'm drinking it now as summer slip-slides away.
Beautiful images of a summer day and night Laura. It does go quickly, although here in Texas it sometimes seems a tad long :-)
Loved the lacy crystals on the home-churned vanilla. Delicious words here...
Summer's sights, tastes, sounds. . . beautifully delivered.
Yum, Texas sheet cake . . . I can see the Saran wrap stretched tightly over it. This was beautiful.
Beautiful! I love her hair!!!!
i sat there on your porch with you. thank you... beautiful.
The sunburn fading off shoulders...
That's exactly it, isn't it?
Perfect, as usual.
absolutely wonderful.
It's so strange. We try to grasp every minute of it, the summer heading into fall with every day.
She is so cute and precious. Happy 4th of July (belated)
I liked that poignant ending.
(I must say I'd like these heatwave days to slip through my fingers fast though ; - )
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