I will always remember
you—newly retired—with
my firstborn son cradled
soft to your chest; those tiny
legs drawn up until he was
no more than a handful. What
a trio we were: the retired man,
lactating mother, and small
one of adulation. Everyday
we journeyed to the farm
lactating mother, and small
one of adulation. Everyday
we journeyed to the farm
and your embrace because
it gave me great joy to watch
the two of you sleep on
the couch. Funny how memories,
like rust, grow dull with time
and oxygen…until the doctor
uses words like: “mass” and
“malignant” and “tests”. The
surgery went well, though it
it was no picnic. It was the
surgery went well, though it
it was no picnic. It was the
waiting on tests that nearly did me
in. And when your son texted
me today: “All pathology is
negative…no cancer in the
lymph nodes”, I wept like a
child. Tonight, we all stood
out under the stars and thanked
God for you. I reached for the
hand of that man-child you
used to hold in one hand and
marveled at how beautiful
it is to breathe and be alive and
receive what oxygen gives.
for the tweatspeak poetry prompt and
photoplay at The High Calling. and in
celebration and giddy joy for good news.
receive what oxygen gives.
for the tweatspeak poetry prompt and
photoplay at The High Calling. and in
celebration and giddy joy for good news.



19 comments:
I am glad for your good news. :)
Excellent, excellent poem. I almost* welled up. Congratulations on your all-clear.
*actually did
Thanking God with you. I know that 'holding your breath' place where you can feel the pounding of your heart inside your chest, while all the world keeps moving along right past yours. What sweet relief to open the gift of more time. Precious blessings from our good God.
Oh I'd like to jump into your big pool of good news and rejoice with you!!!
May I, please?
I must warn you, I splash a lot when I'm rejoicing.
Wonderful to know that all is well with your dear Dad, Laura. Blessings! x
Rejoicing with you!
Lovely poem, Laura.
Thanking God with you, friend. And I can just see that dear man cradling your sweet son.
Lovely, Laura. (Thanks for sharing, even last minute. You know I'll take your words whenever they arrive! :)
beautiful! rejoicing with you on the good news. really like your imperfect prose contribution, too.
Oxygen giveth and oxygen taketh away.
So happy for your good news!
A beautiful poem.
He is our every breath. Rejoicing with you.
It seems as if we hold our breath until some sort of news reaches us; good or bad. Then to give a great sigh of relief to know that we have been given time to breath deeply once again. God bless all the boys young and old and all the girls too!
I am glad for the good news. I forgot to say that, and I'm afraid I sounded crass.
this was so beautiful. I'm glad the news was good.
Praise God! i love good news! and what a lovely way to share it! thanks for sharing!
rejoicing! btw, your words are like oxygen too.
this touched my heart ... you relived and moved forward in one breath~
Glad to catch up on the outcome of the prayer request. (I've been out of the loop, tending to new baby and lactating mother here - loved how it all connected for me, your description of that earlier time.) Enjoyed this poem, Laura. Followed the link from the TS Poetry FB page!
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